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@@ -82,18 +82,18 @@ <h3>Introduction: The Call to the Stars</h3>
         The starry night sky was always meant to be a pure shine and sparkle.
         It was never meant to be feared, nor dismissed as an empty void.
         It is an endless shimmer of distant worlds, each glowing like a secret waiting to be uncovered.
-        In the quiet hours, the stars speak not in words but in light, in the way they flicker, in the way they stretch across the cosmos with quiet defiance.
+        In the quiet hours, the stars speak not in words, but in light, in the way they flicker, in the way they stretch across the cosmos with quiet defiance.
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         Mysterious radiance to which we find ourselves drawn toward.
         For centuries, we have gazed upward, letting the stars pull at the edges of our thoughts.
         And for the first time, you feel the invitation to step beyond what is known and never stop moving toward the horizon.
         All of this in the hope of unraveling the mystery of this live stream of long-faded pasts.
-        Plural, indeed, for each flicker of light has traveled distances so vast, so grand, that they stretch beyond the limits of imagination.
+        Plural indeed, for each flicker of light has traveled distances so vast, so grand, that they stretch beyond the limits of imagination.
         Sort of a time machine with the built-in delay in how it reveals itself to us.
         It is awe-inspiring to think that when we gaze at distant galaxies, we are actually witnessing how they existed millions or even billions of years ago.
         The deeper we peer into space, the further back in time we are looking.
-        What is even more astonishing is that we might be able to literally observe echoes of the cosmos’ infancy.
+        What is even more astonishing, we might be able to literally observe echoes of the cosmos’ infancy.
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         Yet the cosmos is not merely a destination.
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ <h4>Freedom as the Gateway to Discovery</h4>
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         What if, then, we harnessed technology to truly liberate our species?
-        Imagine a replicator, the ingenious device from the Star Trek universe capable of eliminating scarcity.
+        Imagine a replicator, the ingenious device from the Star Trek universe, capable of eliminating scarcity.
         With such a tool, poverty dissolves, survival becomes a guarantee and exploration takes center stage.
         If this were possible, would humanity finally turn its gaze fully to the stars?
         Before the replicator could craft matter seamlessly, it would require AI-driven quantum DNA computing, a fusion of biology and computation that unlocks true molecular synthesis.
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ <h4>Freedom as the Gateway to Discovery</h4>
         Perhaps, even the idea of our cosmos being a mere speck within another universe, or a black hole, would no longer carry the weight of distance.
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-        Slow your stride and don't go instantly as far as possible. Exploration is not merely distance traveled but wonder uncovered. Absorb the intricacies of the cosmos without disturbing their delicate balance.
+        Slow your stride and don't go instantly as far as possible. Exploration is not merely distance traveled, but wonder uncovered. Absorb the intricacies of the cosmos without disturbing their delicate balance.
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         <h3>Part II: The Journey Begins</h3>
@@ -154,11 +154,11 @@ <h4>The Moon - Our First Footstep</h4>
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         Perhaps, one day, we breathe life into it, sculpting verdant landscapes where once lay barren dust, making it the closest green eye pleaser in the sky.
-        Like a Golf Course where hitting a hole-in-one would be quite a slow-motion spectacle.
+        Like a Golf Course, where hitting a hole-in-one would be quite a slow-motion spectacle.
         While at it, we could also rejuvenate the scattered tripped over relics of past landings, breathing life into the remnants of humanity's first daring steps.
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-        Should the Moon eventually drift away then some future generations might write about its heartbreaking departure.
+        Should the Moon eventually drift away, then some future generations might write about its heartbreaking departure.
         But for now, the Moon remains a watchful guardian, whispering its ancient tales as we prepare for the next great leap.
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@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ <h4>Stars Beyond - Vast Potential Encounters</h4>
         The mystery in its truest form - one not just bound to the spectacle of distant light, but to the reality that lies beneath its illusion. Bending space-time does not simply deliver you to the presence of a star or a world as it once was, frozen in the slow transmission of light across the cosmos. It takes you to the truth of its existence, the immediate presence, unfiltered by the delay of perception. What you see in the night sky is the past, but the journey itself unveils the present.
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-        Perhaps transition between celestial bodies by following the seamless philosophical continuity or use a purely astrological approach - guiding pathways that intertwine with destiny itself.
+        Perhaps transition between celestial bodies by following the seamless philosophical continuity, or use a purely astrological approach - guiding pathways that intertwine with destiny itself.
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         But no matter the lens through which you navigate, your course is yours alone to chart. Warp Speed to you, the explorer of the unknown. May the journey unfold in ways yet unimagined while ready to inspire a cosmic adventure.
@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ <h4>Beyond Distance - The Architect(s)</h4>
         This could be the key to pushing past Kardashev barriers, where technology ceases to be separate from life itself.
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-        If nothing else, the full Kardashev Scale, with all 7 levels of Alien, does present a somewhat neat tool that can be used in philosophical debates to bridge the gap between currently entrenched science and religion. Almost like a quantum qubit allowing for entanglement yet being able to collapse to either state depending on the balance imposed to its entangled state, while not forcing one side to concede to the other. The boundaries between disciplines are artificial constructs, rather than inherent limitations. And truly, we should be grateful that science cannot disprove the existence of God. Imagine the kind of existential upheaval that would cause.
+        If nothing else, the full Kardashev Scale, with all 7 levels of Alien, presents a somewhat neat tool that can be used in philosophical debates to bridge the gap between currently entrenched science and religion. Almost like a quantum qubit allowing for entanglement, yet being able to collapse to either state depending on the balance imposed to its entangled state, while not forcing one side to concede to the other. The boundaries between disciplines are artificial constructs, rather than inherent limitations. And truly, we should be grateful that science cannot disprove the existence of God. Imagine the kind of existential upheaval that would cause.
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         <h4>The Whisper of the Infinite - Neutrinos</h4>
@@ -345,10 +345,10 @@ <h4>The Whisper of the Infinite - Neutrinos</h4>
         Elusive and subtle in nature, neutrinos are the eternal silent travelers of universes - vibrating as unseen harmonies. Are they the exception, or the rule beyond rules? A force unmeasured, neither particle nor ghost, dancing on the edge of existence - barely there, yet never gone. Drifting between the known and the void, they were born in the heart of dying stars, forged in the incandescent furnaces of supernovae, carrying encrypted remnants of celestial whispers through the great silence of space.
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-        They drift through realms unseen, untouched. With every passing second, they will intrude your personal space in billions, whether you like it or not, yet that intrusion could ever be comparable only to the faintest whisper of a breeze. Almost as if the hand of the divine force set neutrinos loose upon the cosmos to weave through galaxies like threads of forgotten whispers woven into the fabric of time.
+        They drift through realms unseen, untouched. With every passing second, they will intrude your personal space in billions, whether you like it or not, yet that intrusion could ever be comparable only to the faintest whisper of a breeze. Almost as if the hand of the divine force set neutrinos loose upon the cosmos, to weave through galaxies like threads of forgotten whispers woven into the fabric of time.
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-        Would anyone ever dare to call neutrinos cosmic litter? Even though abundant, they do not clutter nor obstruct - they are passive wanderers observing without interference, more like echoes of existence, tracing the footprints of cosmic events rather than polluting space in any tangible way. And if you dare call them names, remember that they can "see through you" and even triple dare you to play "catch me if you can" game.
+        Would anyone ever dare to call neutrinos cosmic litter? Even though abundant, they do not clutter nor obstruct - they are passive wanderers observing without interference, more like echoes of existence, tracing the footprints of cosmic events rather than polluting space in any tangible way. And if you dare call them names, remember that they can "see through you", and even triple dare you to play "catch me if you can" game.
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         We chase after neutrinos, trying to unravel their (un-)unravelable mystery, so it is no real wonder why this has, at present, gained attention of at least 1400 world scientists, looking to decode a hidden rhythm in their passage - an overlooked form of cosmic communication.
@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ <h3>Appendix II: How Perception Shapes Our Reaction</h3>
         <h3>Appendix III: International Space Station - A New Purpose</h3>
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-        Coming from no expert in this field, it appears that bureaucracy determines the budget for space programs thus deciding the ones that survive and the ones that don't, ushering in inconsistency into almost any long-term planning.
+        Coming from no expert in this field, it appears that bureaucracy determines the budget for space programs, thus deciding the ones that survive and the ones that don't, ushering in inconsistency into almost any long-term planning.
         Artemis space program does include Lunar Gateway, whose purpose is pretty much what this appendix is suggesting but in newer uniform.
         Should this program get cancelled for whatever reason, and not transition into private hands, then here is an alternative with another alternative so keep reading on.
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@@ -458,10 +458,10 @@ <h3>Appendix III: International Space Station - A New Purpose</h3>
         <h3>Appendix IV: Let's Get Serious</h3>
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-        Yet for all our dreams of reaching distant worlds, we must first face the truth of the one we already call home. So, let us put this dreamy and cheeky cosmic poetry on the back burner and focus on here and now.
+        Yet for all our dreams of reaching distant worlds, we must first face the truth of the one we already call home. So let us put this dreamy and cheeky cosmic poetry on the back burner and focus on here and now.
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-        Unless we all start caring about our Blue Planet more than ever, there might just not be any other destination that can shelter us in the same way, especially not Proxima b, since we do not know of how to get there and have not even conquered Mars yet.
+        Unless we all start caring about our Blue Planet more than ever, there might just not be any other destination that can shelter us in the same way, especially not Proxima b since we do not know of how to get there, and have not even conquered Mars yet.
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         Replicating Earth's delicate balance on Mars may be an endless endeavor, even with AI at our side. Why reshape another world when the one we have is slipping through our fingers?
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         To make things a bit clearer, let's use a slightly different Mars perspective: The dream of inhabiting Mars will have to rely on a mindset that demands highly knowledgeable individuals who can operate with a high precision in such a hostile environment (for better understanding maybe watch The Martian movie).
         This is exactly the mindset required to preserve this Earth while it still provides a relatively comfortable environment.
-        Not sure if I am comparing apples to oranges here but the common denominator is still humanity and it is not like these knowledgeable humans are not already on Earth.
+        Not sure if I am comparing apples to oranges here, but the common denominator is still humanity and it is not like these knowledgeable humans are not already on Earth.
         Establishing a colony on Mars will take at least one generation that cannot really make that habitat big enough to host 8 billion or even 8 million people.
-        Even if they could, let us assume 24/7 shuttle service from Earth to Mars that can carry 1000 humans and with current average travel time of 7 months provided all necessary conditions are met.
+        Even if they could, let us assume 24/7 shuttle service from Earth to Mars, that can carry 1000 humans and with current average travel time of 7 months provided all necessary conditions are met.
         This would be a lengthy migration in such numbers that not even the birds could currently do on Earth (slight exaggeration - what do I really know about birds).
         If you can actually see yourself or your offspring being a part of this fairy tale travel then good for you and bon voyage, just remember to also keep your hopes high that Earth will be as patient and considerate while you are doing this.
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         Also, a good luck to you while skateboarding the obstacle course in Jezero crater, or using its clay to sculpt the monument to your success in being there at all.
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         Good thing we did not consider the (in)famous Fear Of Missing Out (FOMO), an impulsive phenomenon creating overtourism that recklessly erodes most of its destinations and lives of the native inhabitants thus contributing to overall degradation of Earth.
         As if checking off items from a doomsday bucket list for a perfect selfie.
-        Life is too short to do anything else anyway but if we continue seeking novel experiences while ignoring the fundamentals of survival, then the future might collapse because of indulgence.
+        Life is too short to do anything else anyway, but if we continue seeking novel experiences while ignoring the fundamentals of survival, then the future might collapse because of indulgence.
         If doomsday truly arrives, I suppose I’ll have to ask all the FOMO people to forgive me.
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         I would suggest to use AI whenever you might REALLY need it, for life or work and either a single or multiple AI services, since they could provide valuable and possibly different insights into the subject.
-        Then merge all the parts you find useful and credit the services for their contribution if that is an option.
+        Then merge all the parts you find useful and credit the services for their contribution, if that is an option.
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         A little bit of a description of each character: