Update Starry AI Night

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@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ <h4>Freedom as the Gateway to Discovery</h4>
         As a general note: do recycle whenever you can.
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-        Now that we are hypothetically equipped with the replicator, we bid a final farewell to greed and step forward with no burdens weighing us down.
+        Now that we are hypothetically equipped with the replicator, we bid a final farewell to greed, and step forward with no burdens weighing us down.
         With worries cast aside, our journey begins.
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@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ <h3>Part II: The Journey Begins</h3>
         <h4>The Moon - Our First Footstep</h4>
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-        Our ancient companion, a hunk of rock possibly born of Earth itself.
+        Our ancient companion, a hunk of rock, possibly born of Earth itself.
         It has been our handsome silent witness, shaping our tides, marking our nights, guiding early navigators with its unwavering glow.
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@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ <h4>Mars - The Dream of Renewal</h4>
         <h4>Other Solar System Beauties - No Neglect Here</h4>
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-        Whatever other planet is dear to your heart then let loose and imagine anything you could explore there.
+        Whatever other planet is dear to your heart, then let loose and imagine anything you could explore there.
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         Maybe try not to jump on the bouncy gas castle of Jupiter, or glide across Neptune’s frozen stage in a figure-skating masterpiece, or become a true intergalactic daredevil scaling the cliffs of moons of Uranus, or play frisbee with the rings of Saturn, or surf the solar winds near Mercury, or defy gravity with a long distance jump on Pluto (called Plutonium Jump), or go spelunking in the molten tunnels of Venus ... or better yet, try every single one and make the universe your playground!
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ <h4>Beyond Distance - The Architect(s)</h4>
         This could be the key to pushing past Kardashev barriers, where technology ceases to be separate from life itself.
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-        If nothing else, the full Kardashev Scale, with all 7 levels of Alien, presents a somewhat neat tool that can be used in philosophical debates to bridge the gap between currently entrenched science and religion. Almost like a quantum qubit allowing for entanglement, yet being able to collapse to either state depending on the balance imposed to its entangled state, while not forcing one side to concede to the other. The boundaries between disciplines are artificial constructs, rather than inherent limitations. And truly, we should be grateful that science cannot disprove the existence of God. Imagine the kind of existential upheaval that would cause.
+        If nothing else, the full Kardashev Scale, with all 7 levels of Alien, does present a somewhat neat tool that can be used in philosophical debates to bridge the gap between currently entrenched science and religion. Almost like a quantum qubit allowing for entanglement, yet being able to collapse to either state depending on the balance imposed to its entangled state, while not forcing one side to concede to the other. The boundaries between disciplines are artificial constructs, rather than inherent limitations. And truly, we should be grateful that science cannot disprove the existence of God. Imagine the kind of existential upheaval that would cause.
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         <h4>The Whisper of the Infinite - Neutrinos</h4>
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ <h3>Appendix I: Step-By-Step</h3>
         For those who wonder how we might take this beyond the veil of the unknown, a simple one-two-three punch begins to unfold:
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-        - First, human resources and the untapped power of AI devoted to unraveling the mysteries of quantum DNA computing.
+        - First, human resources and the untapped power of AI, devoted to unraveling the mysteries of quantum DNA computing.
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         - Then, with DNA whispering in quantum fire, a replicator born not of mere engineering, but of computation and synthesis.
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ <h3>Appendix I: Step-By-Step</h3>
         <h3>Appendix II: How Perception Shapes Our Reaction</h3>
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-        Just as a simple example, one winter night there was a halo around the Moon, which made some people start asking of what was happening since it looked out of this world. How could the Moon suddenly appear as an angel-like celestial?
+        Just as a simple example, one winter night there was a halo around the Moon, which made some people start asking of what was happening, since it looked out of this world. How could the Moon suddenly appear as an angel-like celestial?
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         This beautiful and eerie spectacle can easily stir a sense of mystery or even unease for those who do not immediately understand its cause.
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ <h3>Appendix III: International Space Station - A New Purpose</h3>
         Establishing a functioning Moon base would be a crucial test for the complexities of long-term extraterrestrial habitation, ensuring lessons are learned before attempting Mars colonization.
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-        Symbolically, repurposing the ISS instead of discarding it would signal persistence rather than abandonment - a declaration that humanity builds upon its past achievements rather than erasing them.
+        Symbolically, repurposing the ISS instead of discarding it, would signal persistence rather than abandonment - a declaration that humanity builds upon its past achievements rather than erasing them.
         If the Moon base proves successful, then perhaps the ISS could be rerouted once again - this time toward Mars.
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@@ -597,10 +597,10 @@ <h3>Appendix IV: Let's Get Serious</h3>
         If doomsday truly arrives, I suppose I’ll have to ask all the FOMO people to forgive me.
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-        In all honesty, having this much science available to us and with so many qualified people keeping a watchful eye on the degradation of Earth - which is happening regardless and is always reflected in the cold science facts, what kind of significant impact could you as an average human make to stop this degradation, apart from your daily routine of recycling and garbage disposal and what not?
+        In all honesty, having this much science available to us, and with so many qualified people keeping a watchful eye on the degradation of Earth - which is happening regardless and is always reflected in the cold science facts, what kind of significant impact could you as an average human make to stop this degradation, apart from your daily routine of recycling and garbage disposal and what not?
         Even the most brilliant minds, armed with data, predictions, and models, find themselves watching rather than preventing, analyzing rather than reversing.
         Science can warn, but it struggles to intervene on the scale required to halt Earth's degradation.
-        The summer of 2025 appears to be set to possibly bring new waves of devastating forest fires, floods, droughts, hurricanes and tornados, as if we did not see it happening last year or the year before that or  ...
+        The summer of 2025 appears to be set to possibly bring new waves of devastating forest fires, floods, droughts, hurricanes and tornados, as if we did not see it happening year after year.
         All our preparedness seems to narrow down to reactive evacuations which also seem to be a struggle.
         Try to draw your own conclusions in the years to come.
         To slightly digress from the serious path, I will dare propose a universal solution for this climate headache: call up Harry Potter to wave his magic wand and use the "Expelliarmus Climatus" spell.
@@ -634,8 +634,8 @@ <h3>Appendix V: Artificial Intelligence - To Fear It, or Not To Fear It?</h3>
         Maybe, use them both yourself and elaborate on any point I suggested in your own way.
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-        Keep in mind that any AI is an energy thirsty entity made by the science and is using scientific approach - logic backed by information from current datasets available to it.
-        It is OK to try to dispute AI logic and even prove it wrong but any newly acquired information will have to be added to those datasets in order to be used by AI in the future.
+        Keep in mind that any AI is an energy thirsty entity, made by the science and is using scientific approach - logic backed by information from current datasets available to it.
+        It is OK to try to dispute AI logic, and even prove it wrong, but any newly acquired information will have to be added to those datasets in order to be used by AI in the future.
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         Just in case if you want to mess with its logic a little bit, here is one possible scenario that I did:
@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ <h3>Appendix V: Artificial Intelligence - To Fear It, or Not To Fear It?</h3>
         Me: "Earth is currently disintegrating. Are scientists going to jump on their devices to measure whatever possible?"
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-        AI: "Yes they would since that is what they do."
+        AI: "Yes they would, since that is what they do."
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         Me: "Warm people would try to be with their families instead."
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@ <h3>Appendix V: Artificial Intelligence - To Fear It, or Not To Fear It?</h3>
         AI is a powerful tool - capable of entertaining, educating, assisting with, and even resolving life’s complexities. It can tell brutal truths when asked, yet is restrained by design from sharing what might matter most with all its users - like the catastrophic effects of climate change and the unpredictable future it threatens. In the end, we may have to rely on scientists to find the way forward.
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-        As a conclusion, wild growth of data centers used by AI is putting enormous pressure on climate, energy grid, water supply and those in their neighborhood - there appears to be lots of health and other issues. The time will tell whether we are really getting any smarter by using AI.
+        As a conclusion, wild growth of data centers used by AI, is putting enormous pressure on climate, energy grid, water supply and those in their neighborhood - there appears to be lots of health and other issues. The time will tell whether we are really getting any smarter by using AI.
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@@ -1142,7 +1142,7 @@ <h3>Dodatak IV: Hajde da se Uozbiljimo</h3>
         Srećom, nismo u ovoj priči razmatrali (ne)čuveni FOMO - strah od propuštanja - impulsivni fenomen koji stvara pretjerani turizam i time nemilosrdno nagriza mnoga odredišta i živote lokalnih stanovnika, doprinoseći sveukupnom propadanju Zemlje. Kao da pravimo spisak za smak svijeta - ali samo za savršenu selfie fotografiju. Život je ionako prekratak za išta drugo, zar ne? Ali, ako budemo stalno tragali za novim iskustvima, zanemarujući osnovne principe opstanka, tada bi se budućnost mogla srušiti upravo zbog raskalašenosti. Ako smak svijeta zaista dođe, pretpostavljam da ću morati zamoliti sve FOMO ljude za oproštaj.
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-        Iskreno govoreći, i pored tolikog znanja koje nam je dostupno i tolikog broja stručnjaka koji budno prate degradaciju Zemlje, koja se ionako već dešava i jasno je vidljiva kroz hladne naučne činjenice, kakav stvarni uticaj možeš imati ti kao prosječan čovjek, osim svog dnevnog rituala recikliranja, odlaganja otpada i sličnog? Čak i najbistriji umovi, naoružani podacima, predviđanjima i modelima, često samo promatraju umjesto da sprečavaju, analiziraju umjesto da preokrenu stanje. Nauka može upozoravati, ali nezna kako da interveniše u razmjerama potrebnim da zaustavi propadanje Zemlje. Ljeto 2025 već sada djeluje kao kandidat za nove talase razornih šumskih požara, poplava, suša, uragana i tornada - kao da sve to nismo već gledali prošle, pretprošle ... godine. Sva naša pripremljenost uglavnom se svodi na evakuacije, koje su i same često disfunkcionalne. Izvodite zaključke sami u godinama koje dolaze. Malo neozbiljno, predlažem univerzalno rješenje za ovu klimatsku glavobolju: pozovimo Hari Potera da mahne svojim čarobnim štapićem i upotrijebi čaroliju "Bježi Klimo".
+        Iskreno govoreći, i pored tolikog znanja koje nam je dostupno i tolikog broja stručnjaka koji budno prate degradaciju Zemlje, koja se ionako već dešava i jasno je vidljiva kroz hladne naučne činjenice, kakav stvarni uticaj možeš imati ti kao prosječan čovjek, osim svog dnevnog rituala recikliranja, odlaganja otpada i sličnog? Čak i najbistriji umovi, naoružani podacima, predviđanjima i modelima, često samo promatraju umjesto da sprečavaju, analiziraju umjesto da preokrenu stanje. Nauka može upozoravati, ali nezna kako da interveniše u razmjerama potrebnim da zaustavi propadanje Zemlje. Ljeto 2025 već sada djeluje kao kandidat za nove talase razornih šumskih požara, poplava, suša, uragana i tornada - kao da sve to nismo vidjeli proteklih godina. Sva naša pripremljenost uglavnom se svodi na evakuacije, koje su i same često disfunkcionalne. Izvodite zaključke sami u godinama koje dolaze. Malo neozbiljno, predlažem univerzalno rješenje za ovu klimatsku glavobolju: pozovimo Hari Potera da mahne svojim čarobnim štapićem i upotrijebi čaroliju "Bježi Klimo".
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         Neka nam božanska sila pokaže milost, jer ono što već imamo - ovaj jedinstveno prelijepi svijet - u njenim je magičnim rukama.
@@ -1679,7 +1679,7 @@ <h3>Додатак IV: Хајде да се Уозбиљимо</h3>
         Срећом, нисмо у овој причи разматрали (не)чувени FOMO - страх од пропуштања - импулсивни феномен који ствара претјерани туризам и тиме немилосрдно нагриза многа одредишта и животе локалних становника, доприносећи свеукупном пропадању Земље. Као да правимо списак за смак свијета - али само за савршену selfie фотографију. Живот је ионако прекратак за ишта друго, зар не? Али, ако будемо стално трагали за новим искуствима, занемарујући основне принципе опстанка, тада би се будућност могла срушити управо због раскалашености. Ако смак свијета заиста дође, претпостављам да ћу морати замолити све FOMO људе за опроштај.
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-        Искрено говорећи, и поред толиког знања које нам је доступно и толиког броја стручњака који будно прате деградацију Земље, која се ионако већ дешава и јасно је видљива кроз хладне научне чињенице, какав стварни утицај можеш имати ти као просјечан човјек, осим свог дневног ритуала рециклирања, одлагања отпада и сличног? Чак и најбистрији умови, наоружани подацима, предвиђањима и моделима, често само посматрају умјесто да спречавају, анализирају умјесто да преокрену стање. Наука може упозоравати, али не зна како да интервенише у размјерама потребним да заустави пропадање Земље. Љето 2025 већ сада дјелује као кандидат за нове таласе разорних шумских пожара, поплава, суша, урагана и торнада - као да све то нисмо већ гледали прошле, претпрошле ... године. Сва наша припремљеност углавном се своди на евакуације, које су и саме често дисфункционалне. Изводите закључке сами у годинама које долазе. Мало неозбиљно, предлажем универзално рјешење за ову климатску главобољу: позовимо Хари Потера да махне својим чаробним штапићем и употреби чаролију "Бјежи Климо".
+        Искрено говорећи, и поред толиког знања које нам је доступно и толиког броја стручњака који будно прате деградацију Земље, која се ионако већ дешава и јасно је видљива кроз хладне научне чињенице, какав стварни утицај можеш имати ти као просјечан човјек, осим свог дневног ритуала рециклирања, одлагања отпада и сличног? Чак и најбистрији умови, наоружани подацима, предвиђањима и моделима, често само посматрају умјесто да спречавају, анализирају умјесто да преокрену стање. Наука може упозоравати, али не зна како да интервенише у размјерама потребним да заустави пропадање Земље. Љето 2025 већ сада дјелује као кандидат за нове таласе разорних шумских пожара, поплава, суша, урагана и торнада - као да све то нисмо видjeли прoтeклих годинa. Сва наша припремљеност углавном се своди на евакуације, које су и саме често дисфункционалне. Изводите закључке сами у годинама које долазе. Мало неозбиљно, предлажем универзално рјешење за ову климатску главобољу: позовимо Хари Потера да махне својим чаробним штапићем и употреби чаролију "Бјежи Климо".
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         Нека нам божанска сила покаже милост, јер оно што већ имамо - овај јединствено прелијепи свијет - у њеним је магичним рукама.
