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[money_inflation_nonlinear] Editorial Suggestions #446

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@HumphreyYang

Suggestions by @longye-tian

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  • Remove the grid.
  • Change the legend for the Laffer curve plot to "Laffer curve". Also, use default colors in matplotlib.

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  • Bold face is reserved for definitions and italics are used for emphases.
  • Only the first word in the title should be capitalized.
  • Migrate some of "This lecture studies" to "We study ...".
  • Maintain consistent use of bar and overline.
  • (28.3) repeats (28.2). Consider removing (28.3) and adjusting the links to (28.2) if (28.3) is removed.
  • Define all the notations like $\pi$ and $m$.
  • "limiting values exists" -> exist
  • "...that studies a linear version of the model in this lecture`" -> "that studies a linear version of the model in this lecture."
  • Give a theoretical explanation for the patterns in Figure 28.2.
  • In Equation (28.6) we have $x: x \ge 0$. Remove "x:", and put a curly bracket covering the equation after max to indicate the scope of max.

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