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 ## The dashboard
 
-The whole fleet in one terminal view — every task's `state`, whose `turn` it is (agent or you),
+See the whole fleet in one terminal view, with every task's `state`, whose `turn` it is (agent or you),
 its `container` status, and its repo and slug:
 
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-The `turn` column is color-coded live — green when the agent is working, yellow when it's your
-move, red (`⚠`) when a task is blocked waiting on you — so you can tell at a glance which agents
+The `turn` column is color-coded live: green when the agent is working, yellow when it's your
+move, and red (`⚠`) when a task is blocked waiting on you, so you can tell at a glance which agents
 need you. The `container` column tracks each agent's sandbox as it spawns (`queued → … → live`,
 or `down` when one needs a respawn), and governed sub-tasks nest under their governor (`└─`).
 Press `t` to drop into any task's session, `?` for the full key list.