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76 changes: 39 additions & 37 deletions EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr000/talk_chr000_00.txt
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\\@SYSTEM@<9999>
\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg04", 0, 2>
\aw

\\@SYSTEM@<0>
\\@SYSTEM@<1>
\aw

\\@CHARA_IN@<0, 0, 0, 44, 0>
\\@CHARA_MUKI@<0,0>
\aw

\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 71, 100>

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 4, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0000", 100>
Arcueid
Unbelievable. Talk about a conversion. Why would a
priest pick this Far East island to reincarnate?
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 4, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0001", 100>
Arcueid
Did you discover some really interesting conditions
here perhaps? Oh well, it doesn't really concern me.
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 2, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0002", 100>
Arcueid
It's a small city; it won't even take 3 days to
smoke him out. Just you wait, Roa. I'll take care
of you in no time.

\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
\e
\\@SYSTEM@<9999>
\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg04", 0, 2>
\aw

\\@SYSTEM@<0>
\\@SYSTEM@<1>
\aw

\\@CHARA_IN@<0, 0, 0, 44, 0>
\\@CHARA_MUKI@<0,0>
\aw

\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 71, 100>

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 4, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0000", 100>
Arcueid
Unbelievable. Talk about a conversion.
Why would a priest pick this Far Eastern island
to reincarnate to?
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 4, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0001", 100>
Arcueid
Did you find some really interesting conditions
here, perhaps? Oh well, whatever your reason was,
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Somehow I'd like this one changed a bit more, maybe:
"Were the conditions you discovered here that interesting?"

I don't really care.
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 2, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0002", 100>
Arcueid
It's a small city. It won't even take three days
to smoke him out. Just you wait, Roa.
I'll deal with you in record time!

\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
\e
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\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg05", 0, 2, 0>

\\@SYSTEM@<0>
\\@SYSTEM@<1>
\aw

\\@CHARA_IN@<0, 0, 0, 1, 0>
\\@CHARA_IN@<1, 8, 0, 2, 0>
\aw

\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 74, 100>

\\@GO_SUB@<"QUAKE_1">
\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 6, 0, 1>
\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0000", 100>
Noel
Whoa! A True Ancestor?! Wait-wait-wait!
This isn't part of my job description!

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 6, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0010", 100>
Arcueid
An Executor of the Church...? I'm impressed you've
survived up until now with your capabilities.
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 8, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0011", 100>
Arcueid
I doubt you'll prove much trouble,
so I could pretend I never saw you, but...
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 1, 0, 1>
\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<0, -1 , 2>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0012", 100>
Arcueid
Yeah. You reek of someone I happen to hate!
\l

/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0013", 100>
Arcueid
Guess I'll get rid of you after all!


\\@GO_SUB@<"QUAKE_1">
\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 5, 22, 2>
\aw
\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 14>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0001", 100>
Noel
Eeep! Wait! You've got the wrong person!
Our names are similar, but our personalities
are complete opposites!
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 9, 0, 1>
\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 6, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0002", 100>
Noel
Oh no, the True Ancestor has
already made up her mind about this!
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 4, 32, 2>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0003", 100>
Noel
Ugh, if that's the case, so be it! But don't
underestimate how strong even an unsightly
nobody can be!

\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
\e
\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg05", 0, 2, 0>

\\@SYSTEM@<0>
\\@SYSTEM@<1>
\aw

\\@CHARA_IN@<0, 0, 0, 1, 0>
\\@CHARA_IN@<1, 8, 0, 2, 0>
\aw

\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 74, 100>

\\@GO_SUB@<"QUAKE_1">
\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 6, 0, 1>
\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0000", 100>
Noel
Whoa! A True Ancestor?! Wait, wait, wait!
This wasn't in my job description!

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 6, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0010", 100>
Arcueid
An Executor of the Church? I'm impressed you've
survived up till now with your capabilities.
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 8, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0011", 100>
Arcueid
I doubt you'll get in the way, so I cooouuuld
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the 'cooouuuld' mismatches her voice-tone.
She's almost talking to herself, pretty lowkey in this instance.

pretend I never saw you, but...
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 1, 0, 1>
\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<0, -1 , 2>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0012", 100>
Arcueid
Mhm. Yeah. You reek of someone
I just so happen to DESPISE!
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She sounds weirdly cheerful when she says this, I think the emphasis on despise is unnecessary.

\l

/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0013", 100>
Arcueid
Guess I'll get rid of you after all!


\\@GO_SUB@<"QUAKE_1">
\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 5, 22, 2>
\aw
\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 14>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0001", 100>
Noel
Eeep! Wait! You've got the wrong person!
Our names are the only thing that's similar!
We couldn't be any more different!
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 9, 0, 1>
\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 6, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0002", 100>
Noel
Oh no, she's already made up her mind!
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Keep the True Ancestor thing, Noel likes to comment on vampires in this way in general, so I think its good you keep that part of her voice.

There's no way she'll budge!
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 4, 32, 2>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0003", 100>
Noel
Ugh, if that's how you wanna do it, fine!
But don't underestimate how strong even
an unsightly nobody can be!

\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
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\\@SYSTEM@<0>
\\@SYSTEM@<1>
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\\@CHARA_IN@<0, 0, 0, 1, 0>
\\@CHARA_IN@<1, 9, 0, 2, 0>
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\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 75, 100>

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, -1, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0000", 100>
Volv
That soul... pale as the sacred mountains...
There's no doubt about it.
We finally meet, Princess of the True Ancestors.

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 2, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0020", 100>
Arcueid
Who are you? Not a Dead Apostle I've seen before,
at least. Some newbie who just popped up in these
last hundred years?

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 1, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0001", 100>
Volv
Vlov Arkhangel...
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 4, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0002", 100>
Volv
We've met before, just once...
I've been in pursuit of your shadow
from across the distant ocean...
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 0, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0003", 100>
Volv
But neither of us need stay here for long...
This city is warm of rot... yet cold like the void.
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 2, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0004", 100>
Volv
I shall sever your head and be rewarded with your
heart... With that... my illness shall surely heal.

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 8, 0, 1>
\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<0, -1 , 2>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0021", 100>
Arcueid
I see. I wasn't really planning on it,
but if you want to die so badly, I'll help you out.
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 10, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0022", 100>
Arcueid
Don't worry, I won't leave any traces of you behind.
You know, out of consideration for your reckless
bravery in facing me head-on.

\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
\e
\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg06", 0, 2, 0>

\\@SYSTEM@<0>
\\@SYSTEM@<1>
\aw

\\@CHARA_IN@<0, 0, 0, 1, 0>
\\@CHARA_IN@<1, 9, 0, 2, 0>
\aw

\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 75, 100>

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, -1, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0000", 100>
Volv
That soul, pale as the sacred mountains...
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Because this word 霊峰 appears a bunch in A:E's FGO profile/lines, I've sort of figured out a bit better what the metaphor here is. It's like: "as white as a virgin mountaintop" or something. You know, since it has snow.

There's no doubt about it.
We finally meet, Princess of the True Ancestors.

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 2, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0020", 100>
Arcueid
And you are? I've never met you before.
Are you some rookie Dead Apostle who popped up
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For reference, Arcueid straight up says 'newbie' here in English. I don't mind changing these kinds of words, but I don't really see the point in changing it from 'newbie' to rookie.

Also, I kinda think the previous structure felt a bit better in general. It was sort of irregular and conversational, but perfectly in line with how Arcueid talks. Implied pronouns should be fine here.

in the last hundred years?

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 1, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0001", 100>
Volv
Vlov Arkhangel.
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 4, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0002", 100>
Volv
We've met before, just once.
I've been in pursuit of your shadow from across
the distant ocean ever since.
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This is quite unclear, because Vlov here confirms they've met, and we know where (France), so its unclear if he's been pursuing her 'ever since'. That's quite unlikely in fact, due to lore stuff, but especially since he implies in MBTL to have been in his homeland before coming to Souya.

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// TODO: Tackle this line again once I've got a better feel for
// Vlov's register.
\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 0, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0003", 100>
Volv
But neither of us need to remain here for long.
This city is warm of rot, yet cold like the void.
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 2, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0004", 100>
Volv
I shall sever your head and be rewarded with your heart.
With that, my illness shall surely heal.

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 8, 0, 1>
\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<0, -1 , 2>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0021", 100>
Arcueid
Oh, really? You weren't on my to-do list, but if you
wanna die that badly, I'll gladly give you a hand!
\l

\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 0, 10, 0, 1>
/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "00Arc/Arc05_0022", 100>
Arcueid
Don't worry, I'll make sure not even ashes remain.
You know, out of consideration for your reckless bravery.
Not many are stupid enough to challenge ME head-on.
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I feel like this makes the sentence far too direct, when it was sort of snide in the original.


\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
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