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Small editorial items from #41, all text or bibliography; no numbers change.

  • static.tex: "That is the honest reading of the anchor" → "The anchor should be read as follows".
  • bunching.tex: "manufactured a spectacular (E≈196,000) … artifact" → "produced a large (E≈196,000) … artifact".
  • intro.tex, Figure 1 caption: the link pointed at the ONS 2023 bulletin while the input is the ONS 2024 workbook. Now links the 2024 bulletin and names the table (Table 8, enterprises by turnover sizeband, per Fix ONS employment source unit and calibration universes #37).
  • conclusion.tex, summary table: adds the two reduced-rate static costs (−£515m / −£258m) and the bunching readback (E = 10,418, b_LLAT = 5.127, labelled target-inherited), so the "headline summary" covers every headline object.
  • references.bib: removes keenmintz2004, uncited since [Minor] Cleanup checklist: README/data.tex consistency, estimator prose, .bib hygiene #8 was filed.

The larger editorial items (intro/conclusion overlap, correction-history consolidation, figure relabelling) stay in #41.

Refs #41, #32 (minor 7, 9, 11), #8.

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… table, drop orphan bib entry

Replace "the honest reading" and "spectacular" with neutral wording; point
Figure 1(a) at the ONS 2024 bulletin and name the table (the input is the
2024 workbook, not 2023); add the reduced-rate costs and the bunching
readback to the conclusion's summary table; remove the uncited
keenmintz2004 entry.

Refs #41, #32 (minor 7, 9, 11), #8.

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Superseded: this change was cherry-picked into #46, now merged.

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vahid-ahmadi deleted the fix/editorial-neutral-language branch September 6, 2026 09:40
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