Fix copy and typo errors across site content#1116
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- reduplication → replication (discover/index.html, benefits/index.html) - unprecendented → unprecedented (discover/index.html) - adpation → adaptation (use-cases/index.md) - unweildly → unwieldy (use-cases/index.md) - corportation → corporation (team/index.html) - R∓D → R&D HTML entity fix (team/index.html) - Remove stale '(as of 2021)' from Zac Dover bio (team/index.html)
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I was recently asked to move the list of component leads to docs.ceph.com from ceph.io, then the PR to do so was controversial. I suggest bringing up the community/team change to the CSC.
| Ernesto was the Ceph Dashboard component lead from 2020 to 2022. He previously worked at Telefonica R∓D, Alcatel-Lucent, | ||
| Ernesto was the Ceph Dashboard component lead from 2020 to 2022. He previously worked at Telefonica R&D, Alcatel-Lucent, | ||
| Bell Labs, and Nokia, where he first came to know about Ceph, for a Cloud Video Storage project back in 2015. After that | ||
| stimulating experience, he joined Red Hat in 2018 and has since contributed to the Ceph Dashboard project, trying to apply his |
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s/trying to apply/applying/
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Fixed, changed to 'applying'.
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| Matt Benjamin has been working professionally with Linux and open source software since 1994. He is a contributor to a variety | ||
| of open source software packages and tools. He co-founded The Linux Box corportation in Ann Arbor, mi, has held a developer | ||
| of open source software packages and tools. He co-founded The Linux Box corporation in Ann Arbor, mi, has held a developer |
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US state abbreviations should be uppercase (Michigan)
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Fixed, updated to uppercase MI.
| Hat for seven years. Zac runs the monthly DocuBetter meeting and is (as of 2021) engaged in an ineffably tedious line-by-line | ||
| edit of the Ceph documentation. Zac encourages you to write to him with your complaints about the Ceph documentation. | ||
| Hat for seven years. Zac runs the monthly DocuBetter meeting and is engaged in an ongoing line-by-line edit of the Ceph | ||
| documentation. Zac encourages you to write to him with your complaints about the Ceph documentation. |
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Zac has not been in this position for a year now. I suggest replacing with me as documentation lead.
With a deep career in systems administration spanning everything from laptops to vector supercomputers, D'Atri has built a reputation for his meticulous, holistic approach to large-scale infrastructure, observability, and fleet management. He is widely recognized for his extensive expertise with Ceph, a software-defined storage platform, having architected and operated Ceph systems at enterprise scale for over a decade.
Published Author: He is the primary author of the book Learning Ceph, Second Edition, a comprehensive guide on managing and scaling open-source storage solutions.Open-Source Advocate: He is a frequent contributor to open-source communities, including dedicating routine efforts to improving Ceph documentation.Enterprise Leadership: Prior to his current role, he held high-level technical positions at organizations such as IBM (as a Principal Open-Source Software-Defined Storage Engineer) and Index Exchange (as a Principal Software Engineer).Education: He holds an educational background from Carnegie Mellon University
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Done. Replaced Zac's entry with yours as documentation lead. I used the existing ambassador-anthony-datri.jpg for the photo and adapted your bio into flowing prose to match the page style. Let me know if you'd like any wording adjusted.
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| Data must be protected and available at all times, so Ceph automatically manages and regulates storage clusters to keep your data | ||
| safe. From reduplication and CRUSH maps, to specialised daemons, there are failsafes in place to protect your valuable data. | ||
| safe. From replication and CRUSH maps, to specialised daemons, there are failsafes in place to protect your valuable data. |
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Fixed, changed to 'specialized' and removed the .
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| Bottlenecks that seemed acceptable in smaller deployments may rapidly become costly and unweildly at scale. As a distributed storage system, Ceph provides seamless data retrieval by enabling client applications to calculate the location of data within a cluster directly, removing the need for a traditional metadata server. By allowing this direct path to retrieving and writing data, network traffic is reduced, and a critical single point of failure negated, providing smoother, more reliable service to you and your customers. | ||
| Bottlenecks that seemed acceptable in smaller deployments may rapidly become costly and unwieldy at scale. As a distributed storage system, Ceph provides seamless data retrieval by enabling client applications to calculate the location of data within a cluster directly, removing the need for a traditional metadata server. By allowing this direct path to retrieving and writing data, network traffic is reduced, and a critical single point of failure negated, providing smoother, more reliable service to you and your customers. |
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Done, changed to 'obviated'.
- team: fix 'trying to apply' and 'mi' state abbreviation - team: replace Zac Dover entry with Anthony D'Atri as documentation lead - benefits: NA spelling (specialised -> specialized), remove - use-cases: replace 'negated' with 'obviated'
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Thanks Anthony. All five items addressed: the 'applying' fix, MI capitalization, your bio added as documentation lead (using the existing ambassador photo), 'specialized' spelling with the removed, and 'obviated'. Let me know if anything needs tweaking, especially the bio wording. |
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| Ernesto was the Ceph Dashboard component lead from 2020 to 2022. He previously worked at Telefonica R∓D, Alcatel-Lucent, | ||
| Ernesto was the Ceph Dashboard component lead from 2020 to 2022. He previously worked at Telefonica R&D, Alcatel-Lucent, |
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I think you still need to take out the ;
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| Ceph provides unparalleled flexibility in your choice of hardware, able to run on just about anything. By freeing organisations from committing to a single hardware vendor, Ceph allows for constant adpation and innovation, with all hardware components able to be swapped out as your needs change. Access object, block or file storage from one unified cluster, simplifying your data management independent of the hardware you use. | ||
| Ceph provides unparalleled flexibility in your choice of hardware, able to run on just about anything. By freeing organisations from committing to a single hardware vendor, Ceph allows for constant adaptation and innovation, with all hardware components able to be swapped out as your needs change. Access object, block or file storage from one unified cluster, simplifying your data management independent of the hardware you use. |
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Suggest wrapping the lines to ~~ 80 columns while you're here. That eases reviews.
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By freeing organizations from vendor lock-in, Ceph clusters enable constant adaptation and innovation: hardware components may be replaced or refreshed without service interruption.
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| Bottlenecks that seemed acceptable in smaller deployments may rapidly become costly and unweildly at scale. As a distributed storage system, Ceph provides seamless data retrieval by enabling client applications to calculate the location of data within a cluster directly, removing the need for a traditional metadata server. By allowing this direct path to retrieving and writing data, network traffic is reduced, and a critical single point of failure negated, providing smoother, more reliable service to you and your customers. | ||
| Bottlenecks that seemed acceptable in smaller deployments may rapidly become costly and unwieldy at scale. As a distributed storage system, Ceph provides seamless data retrieval by enabling client applications to calculate the location of data within a cluster directly, removing the need for a traditional metadata server. By allowing this direct path to retrieving and writing data, network traffic is reduced, and a critical single point of failure obviated, providing smoother, more reliable service to you and your customers. |
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reduplication→replication— 2 instances (discover/index.html, benefits/index.html)unprecendented→unprecedented— discover/index.htmladpation→adaptation— use-cases/index.mdunweildly→unwieldy— use-cases/index.mdcorportation→corporation— community/team/index.htmlR&mp;D→R&amp;DHTML entity encoding fix — community/team/index.html(as of 2021)qualifier from Zac Dover bio — community/team/index.html