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docs: update wording for code freeze - #24
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The sentence carried one subject through every verb, so it read as the vulnerability being frozen and coming down. Splits it so the dates attach to the repositories.
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| reaches the private repositories the same week, is frozen on August 25, is | ||
| public on September 1, and the August repositories come down on September 15. | ||
| reaches the private repositories the same week. Those repositories freeze on | ||
| August 25, go public on September 1, and come down on September 15. |
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Private repositories do not go public The new sentence says the private repositories go public on September 1. The policy instead says their patches are merged into public repositories on that date, while the private repositories remain available to invited teams until September 15. Readers could mistake this for a change to who can access the private repositories.
| August 25, go public on September 1, and come down on September 15. | |
| August 25; their patches go public on September 1, and the private repositories come down on September 15. |
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The rewrite made the repositories the subject of every verb, so it read as the private repositories becoming public on the first. They stay private until they come down on the fifteenth; their patches are what goes public.
The worked example carried "a vulnerability" through every verb, so it read as the vulnerability being frozen and coming down. The dates belong to the repositories.